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Winter Transforms all
Frost, Fog, Ice, Snow, Rain, Dark, Cold
Laboured life unfolds
Note, this is my 3rd Haiku. Not sure if I am doing these right.
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Change your thoughts change your life
Winter Transforms all
Frost, Fog, Ice, Snow, Rain, Dark, Cold
Laboured life unfolds
Note, this is my 3rd Haiku. Not sure if I am doing these right.
I believe that the thoughts we create impact our life greatly. If we are able to change our thoughts, redirect them, catch our negative thinking.We can change our life. Read my 'About' page to find out more about thoughtsnlifeblog.com View more posts
hi there, greetings from locked down Scotland. I like the process of matching pics and haiku. Something to think about, if its not too cheeky! Traditional Japanese haiku consist of 5/7/5 as it suits their short syllable language. (onji c/w syllable.) Many haihu writers prefer shorter syllable length due to the longer sylables inherent in the English language. here’s a couple of examples to show what I mean;-
snow falling
everything
in its place
(Alan Spence)
snow fall
the silence growing
deeper
(Derek Ross)
Many stick to 5/7/5 in english, of course, it just seems too long in my view and it can only be subjective. Just think you’ve got something and may benefit from trying shorter lines to see how you get on. Arra best, Derek
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Oh Gosh you are an expert i just started. I kinda get what you are saying. Will have to try harder. Thanks for the guidance teacher ji. πππ€
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Far from an expert, a fellow traveler maybe π€π±
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beautiful Haiku bella
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Hi Tanvir, happy new year. I hope you are well. Only yesterday I was thinking of you.
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Hello Bella . All good and wish you too a wonderful year ahead. Took a little break.
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Hope you are refreshed
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Yes π
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THAT is a beautiful, haiku, Bella. I particularly love the last line. Well done, my friend.π
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Many thanks
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You’re welcome. π
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Beautifully done!
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Thank you
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Very nicely penned Haiku, Bella.
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Thank you Kamal.
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Always welcome Bella.
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Reblogged this on Love and Love Alone.
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This is a beautiful Haiku π
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Thank you . I hope you are much better, health wise
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Thank you very much so I hope you are tooπ
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π all okay
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