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imaginary
world living life in their head
fool dreams actionless
This is part of Ronovan Haiku challenge, if you want to join click on link here for the instructions.
Note: this is a haiku for me to stop dreaming and start doing.
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I love your haikus, they really are unique. I like how the poem starts out dreamy and then there’s that little rude awakening at the end.
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Thank you Hetty. I am learning , until I started blogging I never heard of a Haiku. And only this year did I try to create some. They are quite interesting and tough to do. But fun. Thank you.
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This is very thought provoking, Bella. Well done.
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Many thanks Robbie. Haiku are quite a fun challenge
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Your haiku is perfect and a great reminder – it made me check in for how readily I tend to take actions towards my dreams.
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That’s great. I definitely wrote this for myself to get myself in gear. And it worked. hehe.
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It is beautiful too 🙂
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Aww so kind of you. Thank you
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Ah, yes, agreed, Bella. Action is necessary for manifestation and movement. Excellent, my friend.
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Thank you Jeff. It is simple isn’t it. If only the motivation would stay!
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Welcome, Bella. Ah, yes, agreed! 😊
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Sometimes we’ve gotta leap❣️
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So true. Sometimes you have just leap..
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You have to act on your dreams for them to become a reality. Your poem is a nice reminderm
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Thank you
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You can’t manifest anything into your life without taking action. It’s one thing to think about it, but it’s another to take action! This is a key point that so many people miss and I think you summed it up perfectly in your haiku.
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Thank you for you thoughtful comments. It is so true, we can plan, plan, plan, dream, dream, dream… but we got do the work too… hehe.. thanks again for your wise experienced comment.
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