This is part of Colleen’s Syllabic poetry challenge! If you want join in.
I am new to Syllabic poetry and this will be my second ever haiku.
This month’s theme is a haiku written by Sue Vincent:
clouds cover the moon, beyond dawn's pale horizon sun rises unseen ©2020 Sue Vincent
this is my attempt
The future is bright.
I cannot see it today
(c) 2020 http://www.thoughtsnlifeblog.com
the promise awaits
Hey I like that! It expresses so much!
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Thanks Hetty. I am trying this new poetry form.
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I love there is conviction and hope together. Beautiful! feels true to me and lights me up.
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Thank you
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a very hopeful one Bella, nice!
And so is Sue’s 🙂
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Thank you kate
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most welcome, glad to see you into poetry!
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