This haiku is my first ever and is part of Ronovan writes challenge #333, click here to find out more about the challenge. My haiku is below.
Prompt: Life and View
Life views the maple
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Leaves turn red, orange and gold
The page of life turns
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Well, that’s very nice! I very much like the last line “the page of life turns.”
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Thank you. It was my first attempt at a haiku style poem
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That is a beautiful haiku! I loved the first and the third line very much.
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Thank you, appreciate your kind words. It was my first attempt. Lots to learn.
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You are very welcome, I am so happy for you 🙂
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Delightful haiku Bella❣️😍❤️
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Thank you
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absolutely lovely!
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Thank you
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A very natural haiku evoking the feel of late Autumn. I am reading Braiding Sweetgrass by Robin Wall Kimmerer currently and she shares many experiences with Maples and the historic connectivity of these trees with her ancestors
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Thank you for your kind words. Thank you the book introduction.
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Beautifully done , welcome to the challenge 💜
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Thank you
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Beautifully written Bella, I love how the page of life turns with the season 🧡🍁 xxx
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Aww great the message came through. Thank you. I wanted to create that feeling where the seasons of nature reflect the chapters of life.
In the last line I could used ‘my life’. But all the syllable counting and the revisions I did just to write 3 lines , I forget the word my.
Seriously Xenia, you are so brilliant with the haiku poetry form. Well all the poetry and photos you do on your blog. And I appreciate your gift of your book as you explain the different forms. I do treasure your book.
I think I am going to keep trying this as it will improve my writing and may be even vocab. Lol.
Happy tuesday.
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Aww thank you kindly dear Bella 🌺 I hope you will continue with this as reading and writing haiku can be a lovely form of meditation in itself 🤗💖 xxx
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Yes I can see haiku being a great way to contemplate and meditate. Yes I certainly want to continue
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So true and beautifully written
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Thank you
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Beautifully written, Bella. The last line was awesome.
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Thank you so much
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Always welcome.
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Nice 😊
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Thanks
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